When sunlight falls - Marge's contest

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Open Poetry #17

When sunlight falls - Marge's contest

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

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0 posted 2001-11-30 08:10 PM

When sunlight falls upon the earth and covers it in her yellow light
She says goodbye to the passed day and hello to coming night
Caught in a moment she may last forever when I hold her very tight
But I know this is not truthful she will disappear to the unknown side

When sunlight falls upon my earth she will be seen at someones side
And she will carry my love and friendship so I hope they'll hold her tight
For even if I do not know you please be sure my heart is yours tonight
When I sleep the sleep of innocence untill you send me back her light

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Want to use the pics on my website? Just let me know. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/http://comm

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-11-30 08:23 PM

Titia, this is beautiful, as is the picture!
You have met Marge's challenge head on with an excellent post!
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Balladeer

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

2 posted 2001-11-30 08:32 PM

Hey, Titia! If Marge doesn't send you a book...I will!!

This is beautiful..

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

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where insanity meets breeding

3 posted 2001-11-30 10:15 PM

Lovely Titia. I'm never sure which are my favourites..your words or your pictures. They are equally beautiful.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

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On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2001-11-30 10:34 PM

This is a lovely poem. And I love the picture.

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-12-01 10:54 AM

Titia~
Oh MY ! So very, very LOVELY~
Thank you sweet friend for taking 'inspire' to the heights of this beauty~

@ Balladeer~
Love n' Hugs~
~*Marge*~

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

6 posted 2001-12-01 01:23 PM

Hi Nancy, thanks, it was fun to do

You're such a sweet Deer, I'll send you a whole can of SPAM garned with Vienna delights

Tracey, you always give me a warm feeling

Sweet Marge, I just simply

Smartchick, I'm glad you like it

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Want to use the pics on my website? Just let me know. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/http://comm

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 12-01-2001).]

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