Open Poetry #17 |
We Melt |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
I sleep you wake me pour yourself upon me in thickness passions lit in melted quickness beneath the petaled touch of your fire fashioned ecstasy of embraces desire to your warmth once again I turn the glow inside me starts to burn I am so at home within your arms touch cast a spell it is my charm kisses that release me, unencumbered a magical tenderness, I abandon my slumber embers flamed a burn to be felt under passions fire of desire, we melt "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh, wow wee, Helen, I'm loving this! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my yes...this is pretty warm...and very well said! Enjoyed, hugs, Nancy. "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Mmmmmmmmmm...soooooooo beautiful and sexy! (smiles) This must have melted his heart when you read it to him! You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Sensually beautiful, so I absolutely love it. Very well done. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
1slick_lady - romantic are your writings. Meaninful are your words to read... BC |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Oh... this is so romantic!! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow! This is just beautiful. You are so romantic. I like it. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I want to melt...James |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Mmmm, my slick friend - the dreams and memories this envokes, and the thoughts that linger... (better quit while I'm still legal!!) jwesley |
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