Open Poetry #17 |
A Lover's Message |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“A LOVER’S MESSAGE” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I’ve thought many times it seems, when my eyes are closed at night, if happiness is only in dreams, then disappears, into mornings light… I know not where it goes, perhaps hidden in my mind, into the recesses of my shadows, or in places where I’m blind… It seems to flee without return, slowly undoing loves door, at times I feel myself burn, for neither side can be, as before… So I ask of you to hear my plea, and know what I say is true, don’t let happen what will be, losing who became one, with you… ~~~~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Its a sad truth that sometimes....well, "before" is no longer possible. You got me crying with this one, Bill. Kathleen (Kay) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Bill, this is so so sad, and I know just how it feels to re-live a dream and be so happy when it feels it comes true, and be worried you may lose it forever! (sad sigh) You are such a loving, beautiful person and I have faith you will forever be one with your love! (sigh) We all love you, sweet friend, God Bless You, I cried throughout this whole poem! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very tender... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
It's Friday night and I read a message from a heart the dreams love into reality..How I wish that it would become so for you, sweet man. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
You deserve the truest love that the world has to offer! You are so kind and romantic...a true gentleman. love, RosePetal |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I know this feeling well, Bill. Good writing here. All writing comes |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Irish Rose - yes, it is very true that one can't go back the same as before. Truly sad, as I wonder... Noah - you are one of the most kind, warm, compassionate persons that I have had the pleasure of meeting. I thank you from my heart for your very warm replies to my writings. I would be honored to call you my friend. Thank you... Sunshine - my heart I believe makes it so... Startime - yes it is Friday evening, and you know my heart. Fragile it is, with words of romance to write... RosePetal - I'm touched by your caring words, and they make me smile. Thank you so much... |
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