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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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She shed her skin Found another layer Reverently Gave thankful prayer Heart, stay hidden Emotions that I feel Keep them private I cannot reveal No one can read The words eternity wrote Of unattainable destinies Of love I silently devote No one would understand The ache of this wasted time Find no reason Within my rhyme …..She found another layer Of protective skin Held it all together Painfully, kept it all in….. ~SEA~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
You do this so well Sea, write I mean...very skillfully done...loved it. jwesley |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) So very sad but so beautiful too! (sigh) I pray she may find the courage to express her pain so she start anew and bring on a whole new layer of skin that shines like the sun in heavenly love! (sigh) Soooooo beautiful, sweet Susan, I love your words! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Susan~Your words tumble onto the page with such ease. Beautiful! Enjoyed, Nancy. "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
it is a little depressing, yet somewhat encouraging as well |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - liked this very much. Somehow I do find reason, within this rhyme... BC |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
no one would understand The ache of this wasted time Find no reason Within my rhyme She found another layer Of protective skin Held it all together Painfully, kept it all in ================================= but still the reasons are there...between the lines... layered in cocoons of rhyme... as they are released...the ache quiets... one verse at a time...layers are peeled then healed. a bittersweet beauty here Sea.... well done. jm he said ... "dont cry" ... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Lots of layers sure give you a certain... appeal  Beautiful writing, SEA lady  |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Oh yes this I can fully understand beneath all those peelings are plenty of my hidden heart feelings Hope |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
loved the read sue....sometimes we've got to thank ourselves for having the layers...it keeps in the pain... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Oh gal ... do I ever understand this one~ Tenderly revealing and quietly concealing, sweet poetess~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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