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Eloise
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since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

0 posted 2001-11-29 12:09 PM

Romantic words flow from your pen
And hearts start pumping once again.
The words you place upon the line
Sends me back to another time.

Your words rekindle the burned out coals
As you captivate my heart and soul.
Hidden there within the shadows
I offer you this simple rose.

You soothe the soul and mend the heart
And one more time the teardrops start.
Knowing deep down love never ends,
Perhaps we'll try this once again.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2001-11-29 12:34 PM

Eloise, this is really a nice love poem. Someone is re-lighting the fires?

"Your words rekindle the burned out coals
As you captivate my heart and soul."

OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

2 posted 2001-11-30 11:02 AM

Wonderful words, I enjoyed thank you.

Regards,
Olias.

texasrose
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since 2001-10-24

Posts 146

3 posted 2001-11-30 11:03 AM

Very beautiful.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-11-30 01:37 PM

Eloise, I like this very much. In simplicity of line, one sees the fine qualities of truth...

enjoyed this very much...

Eloise
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since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

5 posted 2001-11-30 03:15 PM

Thank you all for stopping to read and comment. Much appreciated. No, Midnitesun, no rekindling -- just words from my pen!

Domzi
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since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

6 posted 2001-12-01 01:35 AM

Such wonderful words...

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2001-12-01 03:28 AM

Enjoyed...James

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

8 posted 2001-12-01 09:17 PM

I enjoyed your wonderful words

RP

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2001-12-01 09:31 PM

Eloise - romantic words indeed.

BC

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2001-12-01 09:34 PM

Beautiful!!! ~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

11 posted 2001-12-01 09:37 PM

*sigh* romance is flowing so beautifully from your pen that I can only hope that soon you will have someone to love you totally and completely. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2001-12-01 10:02 PM

(smiles) Romantic words flood your loving heart, sweet Eloise! You will forever melt your loves heart with your love! (smiles) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eloise, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

13 posted 2001-12-02 07:55 PM

This is lovely, Eloise! Very lovely!

Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

14 posted 2001-12-02 08:20 PM

Once again, thank you to all who have commented.

I was in a romantic moment, now- -- to get my muse flowing again.

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