Open Poetry #17 |
However You Explain It |
John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
However You Explain It I wanted so to call you, And to hear your tender voice. I stood beside the pay phone, And I had to make my choice. I wanted so to talk to you- I know that I’m a fool… Life’s a game that ends in death, If you don’t play by the rules. I guess it has to do with age- The feelings that emerge… Desires to live our youths again, Surrender to the urge… Of living loose and crazy- Of running wild and free… However you explain it, It has gotten hold of me. But I climbed back in my pickup, And I heaved a weary sigh. And drove on down the highway With a teardrop in my eye… Perhaps it is a product, Of spending so much time alone- However you explain it… I guess I’ll just take it home. © Copyright 2001 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* oh gosh the sadness just pours from these words. My heart goes out to you. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ever read Badger Clark? I think you would enjoy his work, as much as we enjoy yours... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
John, Enjoyed the read. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
We are the sum total of our life experiences... You, sir, have consummate wisdom... |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
*sighhhhh* This just hit me hard. Like, I could picture this happening. And it flowed marvelously. I loved it much. Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent expression, John! Very well done! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
John this is very insightful and extremely well done! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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