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Snowflakes Fall
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Snowflakes Fall |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Snowflakes Fall Snowflakes fall on soft lips melting slow a sweet kiss Loving eyes shine with love looking deep take my heart Gentle touch hand to face tracing love breath a sigh Bending close feel my lips kissing sweet taste of love Holding close arms held tight sighing heart feel my love Snowflakes fall not felt now lovers share soft sweet touch Karen Torbiak© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StarTime~ *Sighhhhhhhhhhh* Just how lovely this is~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is SO beautiful!  *sigh* love it |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
A sweet poem, But it’s still a bit early in the year For the twirling fall of flakes around here. Gloom |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Marge...thank you. I knew your romantic heart would like this one. **hugs** SEA...*sigh* I know the feeling. *grin* now if only I can find someone to kiss.  **hugs**Professor Gloom...it has been snowing on and off here for the past few days and I just couldn't help but dream what it would be like to share a kiss in the snow. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Oooh la la...this is lovely dear. (hugs) |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
stunning.... ever deep...runs |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"kiss me it's begninning to snow. . . " (from Rent) this just made me think of that line. . . great job. . . it's perfect. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Perfectly enchanting Karen! Heard from relatives in Edmonton that they had to get the snow blower out Sunday. Hope it's headed east...can't wait to make snow angels and kiss someone in the snow! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
RosePetal...**hugs** back at you. It is such a romantic fantasy. I am glad you liked it. A Whisper's Caress... thank you **hugs**Sven...I know this will make me seem pretty stupid, but who is (Rent)and where do I get to hear/see this line you used? **hugs** I am so glad you liked it. Nancy...well, girl, you can have the cold that goes with it. I love the snow but -26 is too cold for this star. I am in southern Alberta so it came south to get us... *grin* I hope you get some soon. There is such magic in snow. **hugs**Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* lovely done! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, this is beautiful, and romantic..as is your style. But I don't want it to snow...  Sandra |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
~Sigh...a gorgeous winter verse of lovers and passion!!! You are such the woman of poetic romance in the elements. Sincerely, Regina |
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