Open Poetry #16 |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Your body held me suspended in fevered, narcotic haze should I have known some beauty is just surface no matter I would have lay down, anyway |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
How true, how true. No matter whether we know the outcome, if it's love, we'll take the chance. We only have the low's, because we've lived such highs. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Wow...you've got me dancin and prancin with this one! 'Tis true, I did it too. And would again, given half a chance. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Duncan, You really do have a unique style. This is very lovely and speaks volumes. And, sigh, yes I think we all have. Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul.... |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, shades of my past life ... This is quite powerful, and so true at so many different times of our lives. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan, Enjoyed the read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enjoyed this one I did! Been there, done that...etc. Good write my friend. ~Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
What we do for love, is in our eyes(the truth) but we fool ourselves for love's sake. Love this one and ouch...it hurts. |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Oh boy...it's like you were inside my head for a minute. You have great insight. Wonderful write. :-) |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
...but we would lay down in a different frame of mind.....and that makes all the difference. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
wow and double wow! |
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