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Open Poetry #16

One Remembered Morning

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2001-10-06 10:20 PM

Bright crystals gleaming your glorius hue
awaken from dreaming to emerald seas .
Let dawns' hallowed stillness wash yesterday cares
away , we'll not speak of them now , be at peace .

Mute colors swift fading a warmth fills the air
ascending in currents aloft to dispel
what no longer warrants the slightest of note ,
all is well in this moment suspended in time .

A jeweler has cast precious stones at your feet ,
they glimmer and sparkle in cascading light ,
replete with the colors of rainbows and fire ,
behold them in wonder for they are a gift .

Not all have been graced with the power to see
embrace and commit it to memories store ,
for what you have witnessed can ne'r again be
nor shall you ever be as were before .

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

1 posted 2001-10-07 01:29 AM

Beautiful words penned here.

Let dawns' hallowed stillness wash yesterday cares
away , we'll not speak of them now , be at peace

Those lines were particularly touching

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Lady Ollyne
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

2 posted 2001-10-07 01:45 PM

for what you have witnessed can ne'r again be
nor shall you ever be as were before .

quite nice *s

Lady Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-10-08 06:26 AM

DrMoose~
Positively ponderous~

'Not all have been graced with the power to see
embrace and commit it to memories store,
for what you have witnessed can ne'r again be
nor shall you ever be as were before.'

I like this very much~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2001-10-08 02:33 PM

There's wisdom galore found in memories store...and in your beautiful poem!

[This message has been edited by Denise (edited 10-08-2001).]

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