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Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2001-10-06 08:27 PM

Candy Heart

Savour my flavour
as I make your sweet tooth ache
with the taste of love
I'll never melt in your hands
yet, I'll always melt your heart

By Melissa P. Monette

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-10-06 08:32 PM

Oh Melissa!!! How sweet it is!! Love it, ~Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2001-10-06 09:22 PM

How sweet, an early valentine..

Love it, Melissa.
Sandra

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2001-10-07 01:26 AM

Now you're talking - love in smarties, I would buy a truck full! Very cute, and well done Melissa.

~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-10-07 01:32 AM

being one with a big 'ol sweet tooth heehee, I love this. I can't wait for Halloween

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2001-10-07 01:43 AM

My daughter knows all about those Canadian smarties. And I used to think she just meant you were all so bright, until she received some Smarties in the mail! YUM!
Oh, and the poem is equally yummy.

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

6 posted 2001-10-07 10:05 AM

Melissa, this poem is so sweet! I love it.
Those candies look good enough to eat too.

smiles ~Marie~

Keep the Faith

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

7 posted 2001-10-07 10:38 AM

so sweet.......love it Melissa

Charisma

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2001-10-07 11:22 AM

Melissa,
Clever and sweet.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

9 posted 2001-10-07 11:36 AM

Very well written. I have a sweet tooth.

Chelsea~
Member

since 2001-02-09

Posts 260
Ontario, CANADA

10 posted 2001-10-08 09:12 PM

hey missy,

a creative tanka,
for sure!

kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

11 posted 2001-10-09 01:14 AM

I love Tankas and Haikus. This Tanka is the Best so witty I just love it. Nice Job.

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

12 posted 2001-10-09 01:53 AM

mmmmmm! Sounds like M&M's to me!!!

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 10-09-2001).]

LoveLetters
Junior Member

since 2001-10-09

Posts 35
State of Hope

13 posted 2001-10-10 01:07 AM

You could probably start your own Valentines card line with your beautiful writing. Beautiful work.

Love has many masks. I am but one of them.

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

14 posted 2001-10-10 01:07 AM

I love candy hearts! this is great! makes me hungry for them!!!!

Cindi

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