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Open Poetry #16

A to Z of the Undead.

Ven
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since 2001-10-01

Posts 102
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0 posted 2001-10-06 05:44 PM

Yet another experiment, this time with the alphabet.

A to Z of the UNDEAD.

About before,.............
Called, ....... desperate,
excited, frightened, gasping.

Hopeless, I'm jinxed, killed.
Lamented, mournful, nervous.
Obsessive ? ... perhaps.

Quiet...resoundingly soundless,
Try unmerciful vengence ?
Worryingly xenophobic,
Yours,
ZOMBIE.

by Ven.

Denise

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1 posted 2001-10-06 06:52 PM

Very creative, Ven! I enjoyed this!

Marge Tindal

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2 posted 2001-10-07 07:53 PM

Ven~
Welcome to Passions~

I will agree with Denise ...
This IS most creative~

Enjoyable read~
Playing with words is such a joy to a poet~
Thanks for sharing~`
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

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3 posted 2001-10-08 12:43 PM

This is a very interesting piece. Very original. I like it

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

vlraynes
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4 posted 2001-10-08 12:45 PM

Ven-
   Very cool write..love your creativity.
   Welcome to Passions.
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Ven
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since 2001-10-01

Posts 102
U.K.

5 posted 2001-10-08 03:03 AM

Thanks, I really enjoyed writing this one. Glad you enjoyed reading it

Ven.

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