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Open Poetry #16

you beautiful mistake

Joie de Vivre
Junior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 21
USA

0 posted 2001-10-06 04:05 PM

you beautiful mistake
accidentally spilt
and smudging the scene

erase the appearance
of past-life blemishes

you beautiful mistake
accidentally spilt
and re-arranging the scene

create the resurgence
of future endeavors

you beautiful mistake
accidentally spilt
and leaving me clean

[This message has been edited by Joie de Vivre (edited 10-06-2001).]

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

1 posted 2001-10-06 05:08 PM

I really love the play with words in your poem. Well done!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2001-10-06 05:22 PM

Joie de Vivre,
Enjoyed the read.

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

3 posted 2001-10-08 11:56 AM

this is lovely, well done and unusual. Thank you for this one.

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