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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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She she had heard the words a thousand times tonight they finally reached her ears all along he had said he didn’t care and her heart felt it so painfully clear she had denied herself so many things through years truth was but one the laces that she once had tied had already been cut and needed to be undone she had wondered about her own dangling strings grieving alone at the resting place of it’s death thinking it could not be done, placing one last daisy there she stood up and breathed another breath "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
this is very beautiful.... |
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g-hm Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85 |
sorry, hang in there. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
well written and absolutely superb in imagery, I would say it left me breathless, but taking the next breath seems to be very important. Write on Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
had already been cut and needed to be undone she had wondered about her own dangling strings grieving alone at the resting place of it’s death Beautiful and Touching words, Lady Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is superb...just beautiful! Enjoyed. ~Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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