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redheart angrybraids
Member

since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

0 posted 2001-10-06 04:35 AM

on the rash of a ripe craw dad, there is a linger of surrendring
in the unrehearsed bygone
before blue light,
and tender sliver pink tongue.
And dangerous as the water spills
the spinkler holds the drill,
as tampered as the bottom bay the winter holds the remains of day,
constant in the blue sight seen
the morning speaks, the moring screams.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-10-06 05:13 AM

Indeed, one being's delicacy is another's nightmare....this is sort of a redheart "jabberwocky" to me.. smiling..thank you so much for the feast!!!!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2001-10-06 06:18 PM

as tampered as the bottom bay the winter holds the remains of day,
constant in the blue sight seen
the morning speaks, the moring screams.

you're a pleasure to read Redheart

Keep writing and I'll keep reading you.

Maree

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-10-07 06:51 PM

there are always so many images and thoughts in your work. . .

which is why I'm glad I can always come back to it. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

4 posted 2001-10-08 12:39 PM

You certainly have a way with words. I think I could get more out of it each time I read it

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

redheart angrybraids
Member

since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

5 posted 2001-10-13 06:13 PM

serenity- i know i'm silly, i dont' even live in new orleans, i'm just puttsing about hawaii blue.
dark angel- thank you for reading, i need to check out your stuff, i remember really liking it last time i read,
sven- thank you for coming back, it's such i rush to get feed back.
tracey- thanks for checking it out, i can get some thing new each time also, it's so fun to write,
thank you every one.

sorry for all the miss spelling and punctuation eras

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

redheart angrybraids
Member

since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

6 posted 2001-10-17 02:11 PM

thank you all again

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

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