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grain lady |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii 
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fire trimings wrinkle as grain lady comes home, in weather opaque, in traces of orange, in curtains, see threw. far from the grey rain of winter, here in blossoms pink savor, in the dim wooden room, in soft pulpy begining. far from the main green tropping, in the distance stands weather red, dangling star tread in silhouette halls. fallowing the feather boat aboard, anique blue couch and all. i am singular and simple in smile, and seaking a moment raw and skin deap with my pen. Kindly, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow! excellent imagery and writing. Love it! Maree  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
i am singular and simple in smile, and seaking a moment raw and skin deap with my pen. Smiling...and that was just the easy part! and so beautiful! Your images portrayed in a zen of pen, are so subconscious that they LAYER....don't stop posting! And please don't take this the wrong way...it's meant as total compliment. When I had my babies, and there is that silent language being learned, I learned that IF you pay attention, you learn their language too. Your poetry reminds me of this. And the value of that communication, is bliss. You are most unique---and give me joy. I thank you. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
redheart---Some people see, and others SEE...I think you are one of the others. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
these words were written by a fragile, special soul. Thank you for sharing this with us. (spell: trimmings, beginning, seeking, deep, see-through) I tell you, reading this is an absolute pleasure! [This message has been edited by The Lady of Shallot (edited 10-06-2001).] |
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Rindercella Member
since 1999-11-12
Posts 64La La Land |
"i am singular and simple in smile, and seaking a moment raw and skin deap with my pen." I think your name is as pretty as your poetry. Enjoyed both. *If the shoe fits ... the castle is yours* |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thoroughly enjoyed yuh |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes. . . what serenity said. . . you speak in a language all your own. . . it's up to us to hear and to understand. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
i am singular and simple in smile, and seaking a moment raw and skin deap with my pen. ================================== what a very very cool line... you are such a unique and clever poet Amelia..its wonderful to read your words again Here I stand like it matters... |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
came back to read this fabulous poem from your unique mind! And hope others will as well. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
dark angel- i'm glad you liked, thank you serenity- thank your you reply, you always have something inspiring for me martie- thank you i'm glad you see my poetry the lady of shallot- thank yo for your help, when i went to correct my eras it had past the 24 hour mark, but i realy apppriciate the help, thank you, i'm glad you enjoyed this poem. rindercella- thank you what does your name mean? sven- i'm just glad that i have some where to get awasome input, and poeple are curioius about what i write. thanxs for reading. wayoutwalt- thank you i'm gald janet marie-thank you for checking it out, you always do, thank you lady- thank you agian. Kindly, |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
thank you all again, Kindly, |
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