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My Sisters---lovely luck of rhyme
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My Sisters---lovely luck of rhyme |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Truly, truly am I blessed. So now a prayer of thankfulness. Wondrous love in plentitude, I think it's time for gratitude... "Tie a string around your toe, lest you float away!" Advice that soothed me as aloe. Sharon? I send my love your way. And a childhood fantasy came true via Janet Marie. A twin in her, as she is me. Janet? Butterflies are free. And yes you ARE a butterfly! I'm honored you're a friend of mine. My doreen, is such a dream she cracks me up--she makes me scream. Her words outpour tell EVERYTHING-- her thoughts, my heart in flow of stream. Marge is the echo of my heart. Methinks she knows my every thought. Never has she missed a beat and sweetly wiped tears from my cheek. Nan is there to take my hand. I was surprised to find her there. I thought of her as distant queen, yet she's constant breath of air. Luscious, lovely, sweet Maree, always has been there for me, and Kamla is my sanity... like feeling ground beneath my feet. Karilea's lovely name sang to me a sweet refrain She see things in a different light... truly she is sun's shine bright. Mrs. Santos is a gift divine. Ambrosia is the best describe. I gobble up her every rhyme and every poem a divine dine. Martie, be another gift... her words are as the sands in shift. Her pen, like mine, writes ink of blood-- she writes with wisdom from above. Mysteria, is ME again... made me believe I can be friends... with inner spirit that I war a lesson of what life is FOR. Spitfire is a whisper's shout. Her talent sparks my inner doubts. I read the words she blithely pens and swear I'll never write again. Temptress, she amazes me how can soft intensely be? And after reading angrybraids, I swear I'll never see the same. Sandra croons the saddest tunes-- I fear she feels the pain, like me... catalinamoon--ARISE-- and cast your glory on the sea... Sea, is sparkling full of hope, and constant with the pull of tide-- each wave another splash of brave in salt of all the tears she's cried. Regina, Krista, Honeybee... each one of you a part of me Irish Rose blooms delicately. Kit has generosity. She sees much more clearly than me. A lonely wolf made friends with me. She frightened me. I thought me, MEAL. But as the lion's paw with thorn, We found solace in forlorn. Paula, my sweet lovely friend... Happiness should do her in! Patience in humanity-- I'm glad she waited up for me. Elizabeth did strike a chord... harmonies of inner core I know the pain was ill afford, but thank you so...my Miss Corr! The face that launched a thousand ships... Helen, gives men dreams of kiss. How I miss my meadowmuse, and fyre of sky sings perfect tune. Maureen with grace of dancer's stance... each word heard just screams romance, and if your name is not found here, know that in my heart you're near... Each face of Goddess does reside and all of you be Passion's pride. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 10-05-2001).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey O' Gorgeous One! you're incredible! you know that? Such beautiful sentiments you have penned. Thank you  Maree  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
thank you baby...you know that I know that you know  mirrors me twin ... mirrors and dittos ... thank you for wrapping me up in your rhymes Serene Serendippity  love you me   Thelma and Louise??!! and if Im a butterfly...what does that make you me twin *winkiewinkie*   |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Maree....I hug you to my heart and am popping in too, to call JM a smart ass..rofl...y'see? TWINS  |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is great! Thank you for including me... and I'd like a snippet of your muse please!  |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What lovely thoughts you pen Serentity. The words just simply flow off the page. This could be Passions theme song If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Shar? um...blush...I admit to knowing that he has been circumsized!!!  love you!Missed you Tracy...damn.  thank you, and love to you as well, and now I will calm down...just felt overwhelmed for the outpouring of caring you all have shown me....blush..[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 10-06-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Did someone order a pizza hehetwins for the twins LOL now thats seeing double woohoo rofl....  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ah sweet Serenity your words echo deep within and tho we may not be a twin kindred spirits, together us two so much of me I find written by you  thank you, you are amazing. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
SEA...if JM is right? We all mirror each other, so applause to amazing YOU! And Jan? hmmm...interesting graphic...perhaps maybe..that guy overlooking the other two..y'know..IN BLUE..might look comfy with the "serenity blue" photo? HINT HINT HINT ROFL... (YEP...me having a grand ole time t'nite...love is lovely!) to ya both! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Ser..what a wonderful tribute to all of your friends, and I am most honored, Dear Lady, to be a part of it. You speak of soft like everyone, I'm finding this common speak. But tense seas rumble deep within, I'm my heart upon a shelf. Rising sweetness overflows Each desire grows and grows, As sweetest softness casts a sound All at once, myself you've found. hmmm..dunno where this was going, but it was inspired of course. LOL! My rhyming monster got out for some air. Looks like he choked! Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
awww! Well aren't you just the sweetest Thank you so much for the gift of friendship, you've made me feel at home at Passions Love and hugs ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Serenity--I did not think to be here, among these lucky ones, sisters of words and strength, to be a part of heart. Thank you that I am! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Add some serenity to this poem, and it's perfect... |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Serenity ... this is such a treasure! You've captured so many wonderful aspects of soooo many ladies whose wonderful words and hearts I cherish also. Thank you so much for the sweet words, and for who "you" are as well ... this is just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
Beautiful in thought and write and read. |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Very Beautiful!! warm hugs, ~Marie~ |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
awwwwww..... that's soooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeettttttt *smile* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very sweet and thoughtful! Enjoyed. ~Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh you are so sweet, this is wonderfully done, and I agree with all of the compliments you posted of the others, and I turn them all around onto YOU. Sandra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Serenity I am often told I write of romance sometimes happy, sometimes sad I just hope that my words are enjoyed by some..thank you for the wonderful mention..and yes, we are all sisters on here. hugs ~Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Awwwwww! and you included lil' ole me? Thank you, this was wonderful!~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What an amazing sisterhood! All special gems that speak words so powerful, poetic, but with firm softness. The passionate poetesses prevail. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Do you have any idea how special I think you are? Yup I think you do! Thank you so much for being a friend Karen, I treasure that, and thank you for this *a huge Canadian hug* ~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
To all my lovely sisters---I humbly thank YOU. And especially to those I've yet to meet--just the thought that there is still yet more is exciting. I love you all. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
It is I who was lucky enough to stumble on in to these pages. The acceptace is overwhelming. I stand with you all...probably a head taller, but I gather you all round me like a family photo. You are in the center of this one Serenity! Thank you so much for being so special. You are wonderful! Sincerely, Regina |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
on a day i needed a kind word this was here...thank you ...helen |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Wow! I miss her big time, as I am sure do many. It is not reading her quirky comments that gets me the most I think. Rest well witch! |
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