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For the love of Emiko
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For the love of Emiko |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Fujimaris decided to let his hair grow long and gained a few pounds or two they said his rival was strong maybe martial arts would do he desired her attentions but Emiko was not attracted to him He sent her long stem roses but she didnt love him at all he thought they said she was in love with a Westerner maybe from Dallas, Texas an American cowboy, strong and tall but she was in love with a Sumo wrestler he didnt stand a chance at all He needed to gain another two hundred pounds maybe he could push Takahashi's feet off the ground she thought he had a nice butt to keep his silk Mawashi up so all he could do was to cheer for her boyfriend too bought him a bottle of saki and changed his contacts from dark brown back to blue after the tournament was over Takahashi retired from the sport a ceremony cutting his topknot more time for him now to court but when Emiko turned around, she froze with surprise she was no longer in love with Takahashi but Fujimaris's sapphire eyes. Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. Pablo Picasso [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-05-2001).] |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
This is SO interesting  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
LOL....I love it!! Good writing here. ~NancyLee~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
thats women for you what they want they want until they can have it and then they dont want it arthur i shall never understand them |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You are talking to my heart...fabulous...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you for peeking in everyone...hugs to all ~Victoria~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
One of my favorites...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
different Victoria. . . very different. . . I like it!!! --------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!!This was such a good read that I read it 3 times. Magnificent. I love it. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
having spent three years In the land of the rising sun, I relate to the Sumo... This poem is truly neat....I like the ending really well....thanx.. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
An interesting poem with an honest ending. And who wouldn't fall for those sapphire eyes! Poor guys, they never will understand women. Come to think of it, neither will I. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh Victoria, I adored this one! I printed it out and plan to find a proper little photo to go with it, and put you into my Pipps Scrapbook if that is okay. This was simply a delightful poem. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you so much everyone...i enjoyed writing it and thank you for visiting...hugs to all... ~Victoria~ |
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