Open Poetry #16 |
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starlight garden |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
Were you walking in the starlight in the quiet of the night Shall I find you in the garden by the sun's first early light Are you standing by the arbour where you liked to sit and sew Or tending the sweet scented roses that we planted long ago Shall I hear you calling in the wind that stirs the trees What is that you are saying? Or do the leaves move with the breeze I will go now to our garden and another morning share We are not for ever parted You are there .You are there! arthur |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Very lovely arthur...enjoyed ~Victoria~ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
A hazy veil of ghostly longing... -MVS "Learn to let go of fear, doubt, and disbelief..." --THE MATRIX |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
arthur~ Such a touching write...may you find peace in your starlight garden. Hugs, ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
I have a dear friend in England, this is wonderful, Arthur, just so peaceful! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
We are not for ever parted You are there .You are there! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I LOVE this piece...you just KNOW I do! Beautiful Michael....enjoyed. Hugs across the pond. ~NancyLee~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Ven Member
since 2001-10-01
Posts 102U.K. |
So beautiful and so very sad. A wonderful piece. |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Arthur, I hope you see her there. Lovely haunting poem. Sandra |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Arthur, A very beautiful poem. Love blows kisses in the wind and in your garden. warm smiles, ~Marie~ |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I admire the recognition..of a signature from someone you love. Very lovely and searching. Sincerely, Regina |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Oh Arthur, this is just so pretty and loving. I can just picture this scene in my minds eye. You paint it so well. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
...and a warm breeze on the cheek like the kiss that once was there... Nicely done, Sir. |
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paladin![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
True love knows no time or distance.Good read. paladin |
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