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Open Poetry #16

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cottage
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 138

0 posted 2001-10-05 05:21 AM

Racing
I am with time
Speed is all I need
Swift turnaround of thoughts

Fill me
A mind refreshed
Capable of putting you
Within this wretched soul

Awaiting
As I for this renewal
Moving images in a flash
Leaving none but a memory

to trace

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-10-05 05:47 AM

those turn arounds can take awhile...

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-10-05 08:54 AM

Cottage~

'Awaiting
As I for this renewal
Moving images in a flash
Leaving none but a memory

to trace'

These thoughts were very moving~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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WRBreezin
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since 2001-08-04

Posts 212

3 posted 2001-10-10 12:04 PM

Sharp thoughts...understood.

Willie B

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

4 posted 2001-10-10 12:22 PM

I like this poem. New images racing around, refilling the empty spaces. At least, that's the image I get when 'speed' reading this.

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