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Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

0 posted 2001-10-09 06:13 PM

Beneath the leaves of molten gold,
carpeted bower deep in gentle fold.
A couple joined in soulful deep bliss,
counting the leaffall with nothing amiss.
Waiting for the stars to make their show,
building a fire to reflecting glow.

Embers grow deep as the night comes dark,
with snapping logs and shooting spark.
Firetrails cross the starry night
as meteors shower with all their might.
A gentle nudge with booted foot,
send sparking lights, soaring beyond look.

Sparks rising to heaven, to kiss the stars,
borne on the winds, even to Mars.
Til none can tell which, from only glow,
as the sky blooms out in vivid show.
Two pairs of eyes search out the lights,
seeking the wolf and all heavenly sights.

Finally the fire has burned so low,
as the night crept on, so very slow.
Snuggled in deerskins as the wind grew chill,
warmed by the fire and accompanying thrill.
Stars still shone and embers did keep,
ignored for a moment, as a lifetime did seek.

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

1 posted 2001-10-09 06:20 PM

That was beautiful, Logan! I was right there under those beautiful stars.

Enjoyed.

smiles ~Marie~

Keep the Faith

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-10-09 06:30 PM

I am SO keeping this one!

Logan, I love this

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2001-10-09 06:53 PM

Logan --by the fire a fire was made, and with this poem, it still warms the heart.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-10-09 07:00 PM

you will already KNOW I LOVE this one...and WHY...
and its a keeper....

one more...because I remember.......*smile*

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2001-10-09 07:51 PM

Ah dear Logan...This one is very special to me, for it would appear it has stirred memories in me as well. Printing this one out for a night's read just before my eyes close.
Beautiful write!
~Warm autumnal hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-10-09 07:52 PM

well done Sir. . . you do us Romantics proud. . .

this is excellent. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

7 posted 2001-10-09 08:13 PM

I sure liked this one Logan, and loved these lines:
"Stars still shone and embers did keep,
ignored for a moment, as a lifetime did seek."
I felt those two lines said it all.

This is for you,(a cosmic wolf), and he is kinda cute too.

~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2001-10-09 09:04 PM

Logan~
This is so quietly beautiful~
It whispers in golden sparks~

Reaching out ... touching~
*Hugs*
~*LittleGoose*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

9 posted 2001-10-09 11:04 PM

Ahh, Marie, so glad you enjoyed this, thank you for being here..very gentle smile

SEA, you do me much honor by saying so, thank you..very gentle smile

Martie, very gentle smile, you are most kind with your thoughts..Thank you for the read.

Ahh, Janet Marie, you humble the keeper, and the one more,,very gentle smile. Thank you for that one especially, as YOU well know

Nancy, then it makes it worth while if it is special to you..Thank you for reading and being here..very gentle smile

Sven, thank you for your kind words..gentle smile

Ahh, Mysteria, I loved the wolf, thank you for that and your kind words, very gentle smile

Little Goose, hugs to you with a very gentle smile. your words are always important to me, keeper

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

10 posted 2001-10-09 11:07 PM

Live for the moment - but keep the embers burning, indeed...I like it, Logan..

LoveLetters
Junior Member

since 2001-10-09

Posts 35
State of Hope

11 posted 2001-10-10 12:35 PM

This is certainly a wonderful display of beauty. I know your fire.

Love has many masks. I am but one of them.

[This message has been edited by LoveLetters (edited 10-10-2001).]

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

12 posted 2001-10-10 08:05 AM

Logan, look at the beauty of this! You write such as to bring the reader into the scenery, feel the chill, smile at the embers and say "ohhh" as the sparks kiss the stars....

This is a keeper for all....

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

13 posted 2001-10-10 10:42 AM

enjoy

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

14 posted 2001-10-10 10:53 AM

This was just way to awesome Logan. Wonderful..........wonderful writing~!! I'm smilin..........

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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