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TeChNo KiTtY
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since 2001-09-20
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Wisconsin, USA

0 posted 2001-09-20 02:26 PM


I won't fight the tears, leaking from my eyes, streaming down my face.
I don't even know where they're coming from, totally lacking emotion.
Sorting through memories of what we used to have, I smile, yet the tears continue to fall,
confusing me.
I laugh to myself as the drops gently fall onto my arms, hands crossed in my lap.
The tears come, but without heartache, without pain.
Knowing this,
I do not fight the tears.

"i tried so hard, and got so far..but in the end, it doesn't even matter.."
~Linkin Park

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1 posted 2001-09-20 02:35 PM


Welcome Techno Kitty!  

this is sad but not really.....it felt like a release of emotion that needed to flow.
Very nicely done. I like your quote too  

"It's true/the way I feel
was promised by your face
the sound of your voice
painted on my memories
even if you're not with me
I'm with you"
~LP~

The Rusty Knight
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since 2001-08-29
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2 posted 2001-09-20 02:42 PM


Very nice...this helps explains something to me that I have always failed to understand.....sometimes women cry because it feels good...cleans the soul and emotional clutter....men have to drive too fast, drink too much or go out and shoot something to do that...I think I like your way is better

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

[This message has been edited by The Rusty Knight (edited 09-20-2001).]

TeChNo KiTtY
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3 posted 2001-09-20 02:45 PM


thank you very much, sea  

"i tried so hard, and got so far..but in the end, it doesn't even matter.."
~Linkin Park

TeChNo KiTtY
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since 2001-09-20
Posts 22
Wisconsin, USA
4 posted 2001-09-20 02:49 PM


The Rusty Knight: glad i was able to show you something. i think women are very analytical, and sometimes if you think about a problem long enough..it'll solve itself. at least in my case. lol, my life is one big stark realization, hehe  

"i tried so hard, and got so far..but in the end, it doesn't even matter.."
~Linkin Park

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