Open Poetry #16 |
I Won't Fight The Tears. |
TeChNo KiTtY Junior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 22Wisconsin, USA |
I won't fight the tears, leaking from my eyes, streaming down my face. I don't even know where they're coming from, totally lacking emotion. Sorting through memories of what we used to have, I smile, yet the tears continue to fall, confusing me. I laugh to myself as the drops gently fall onto my arms, hands crossed in my lap. The tears come, but without heartache, without pain. Knowing this, I do not fight the tears. "i tried so hard, and got so far..but in the end, it doesn't even matter.." |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome Techno Kitty! this is sad but not really.....it felt like a release of emotion that needed to flow. Very nicely done. I like your quote too "It's true/the way I feel |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Very nice...this helps explains something to me that I have always failed to understand.....sometimes women cry because it feels good...cleans the soul and emotional clutter....men have to drive too fast, drink too much or go out and shoot something to do that...I think I like your way is better Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. [This message has been edited by The Rusty Knight (edited 09-20-2001).] |
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TeChNo KiTtY Junior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 22Wisconsin, USA |
thank you very much, sea "i tried so hard, and got so far..but in the end, it doesn't even matter.." |
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TeChNo KiTtY Junior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 22Wisconsin, USA |
The Rusty Knight: glad i was able to show you something. i think women are very analytical, and sometimes if you think about a problem long enough..it'll solve itself. at least in my case. lol, my life is one big stark realization, hehe "i tried so hard, and got so far..but in the end, it doesn't even matter.." |
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