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In One's Shoes
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In One's Shoes |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
In One’s Shoes how many stoned paths must be traveled with bare feet before tears begin ~*~ audaciousness jelled but still small chinks of living bear against the soul ~*~ mind warring body sagacity given heed something crumbles soon ~*~ only one’s burden perhaps these words will not fall on deafest ears, mine |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
hmmm..... these I must consider for a bit... the tone I percieve is one of being tired and tired of being misunderstood... and the deafest ears can indeed be our own... hope all is well with you.... for these "feel" troubled to me... |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Sometimes,Lady, we have to get off that path for a while, until the feet get callused enough to let us continue on that path...very gentle smile |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyInWhite~ I send you *hugs* ... and a pair of well-worn moccasins~ Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'll let ya ride on my back, if ya like!  You do indeed sound weary...find a campsite and sit a spell....  |
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Twilight Myst Member
since 2001-10-04
Posts 58Just A Myst At Twilight |
Outstanding haiku, Lady in White!! Really enjoyed them... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
sagacious people always listen to their heart then do the right thing |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
My heart goes out to you Interloper - that is one great response! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I enjoyed these all tremendously Lady in White ... beautifully composed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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