Open Poetry #16 |
![]() ![]() |
Nothings...twenty even |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Nothing done Can’t be undone Nothing undone Can’t be redone One step Is all it takes. That’s up to you |
||
© Copyright 2001 Alan - All Rights Reserved | |||
Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
To take that step is a big decision and I may be left with nothing. Loved it. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
||
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good one Alan! ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
||
Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Don't take the step what do you have empty dreams unanswered questions Glad you liked it Dee. Enchantress...thank you |
||
SEA![]() ![]()
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I took the step and gained everything his heart ![]() wonderful Alan |
||
Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Alan~ This is great~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
||
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
friends never alone across each stepping stone Heartbreaks get mended By ones I befriended Again to say "Hi With heartstrings I tie Hope |
||
bonnie1961 Junior Member
since 2001-09-30
Posts 44ny, usa |
short and sweet and very true......... |
||
Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done.... nice indeed... |
||
SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very good. I like this. |
||
The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
I wish I believed this ![]() |
||
Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
The Lady of Shallot...what is so hard to believe...anything can happen if you truly want it to... |
||
Lady In White![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Very good. |
||
Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
thank you everyone for your comments.. |
||
Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
so true..sometimes that first step is the hardest...cant blame anyone but ourselves.. ![]() ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
||
Twilight Myst Member
since 2001-10-04
Posts 58Just A Myst At Twilight |
|
||
sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Alan, Enjoyed!! ~Marie~ ![]() |
||
![]() ![]() |
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |