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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-10-03 09:09 PM

      She said "Mommy, when I go away today
      will you be there when I get home?"
      I said "Yes honey, I will be here
      when you get home."
      She said "Mommy I might be gone till dark
      will you let the light on for me?"
      I said "Yes honey, I will leave the light
      on for you to come home."
      She said "Mommy, some day
      I might leave for a long, long time
      will I still be able to come home?"
      I said, "Baby, you will always
      be able to come home."
      She said "Mommy, I love you."
      I said "My angel I will always love you."

(For April~ with Love)

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)
[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 10-03-2001).]

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walker
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1 posted 2001-10-03 09:12 PM

That is so sweet, little girls just know the right words to let their love show. Great poem. Thanks for sharing this moment.

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2 posted 2001-10-03 10:42 PM

It gets no more touching than this....beautiful

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3 posted 2001-10-03 11:18 PM

Beautiful and so so touching.

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4 posted 2001-10-04 07:13 AM

GentleSpirit~
Oh, what a little heart-tugger~
Delicately done~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...

5 posted 2001-10-05 06:34 AM

I love it!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison

Heather Miller
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since 2000-07-19

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Bryan, Ohio USA

6 posted 2001-10-06 11:43 PM

This was very sweet :-)
LITL,
Heather

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2001-10-08 01:43 PM

Thanks all. I apologize for not being back sooner, have been under the weather. Thanks alot!

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