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Open Poetry #16

Corner Before Dawn

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-10-03 06:48 PM

In the corner alone with the darkness
Head lowered, arms around knees
The night's near, the beginning of fear
Days and nights gone by, still restless
If only, a hand could reach out
Just to let me know I'm allright
Don't want to hear the owls anymore
Even though they keep me company
I dream of a dawn of love and more
Amidst the swinging dance of the butterfly
Or shall I not have wishes and dreams

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-10-03 06:54 PM

The was beautiful, Daniel. I detect a hint of sadness at the end or maybe a bit of uncertainty? Not sure, but I loved this.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

2 posted 2001-10-04 08:58 AM

I dream of a dawn of love and more"

My favorite line.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-10-04 09:45 AM

JD~

'If only, a hand could reach out
Just to let me know I'm allright'

Oh, that reassuring touch ... so needed by all of us~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-10-04 10:53 AM

Daniel, we are all going to be alright!
Time for another 'group hug', I see.

~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

5 posted 2001-10-04 11:16 AM

Daniel,

Lovely expressions, so softly spoken. warm smiles, and hugs too.

~Marie~

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2001-10-04 08:45 PM

enjoy

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