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Open Poetry #16

Love in different colors

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-10-03 07:27 AM

You paint a picture
masterminded by your love
Sometimes passionate
sometimes hurting
Love in different colors
at times bright
at times blue
Sculpturing your feelings
layer by layer
in this masterpiece of love
Never denying
but always avoiding its pain
With good intensions
burning fire
out of clay
Shaping and reshaping
this new old emotion
Carrying its weight
till the end
Making beautiful
and graceful
your well known sorrow

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 10-04-2001).]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-10-03 09:31 AM

Walker~

'Shaping and reshaping
this new old emotion'

I love the very idea of this piece~
The poet's potter wheel spins~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-10-03 11:26 AM

the imagery in this one is so real, everything, the colors, the emotion! Well done

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"

"Others can stop you temporarily, but only you can do it permanently."

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

3 posted 2001-10-03 11:54 AM

Walker, very well done. Nice images and expressions.

warm smiles, Marie

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

4 posted 2001-10-04 06:56 PM

Very well done! As even love must learn and grow and reshape itself. We just always hope it doesn't meld into something hard hearted.

Sincerely,
Regina

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2001-10-04 06:58 PM

Well done....the ever changing shapes of love.
Enjoyed, Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

6 posted 2001-10-04 07:08 PM

The shaping of emotion you did this well.

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

7 posted 2001-10-04 09:28 PM

First, the title is great. Second, it pretty much nails how I feel I write. Hope you're not reading my mind...there's some pretty scary stuff in there.

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