Open Poetry #16 |
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Softly Changed |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
As ancient limbs creaked in crown with each stir of breeze moonlight danced to rhythms heard best by laying hand on swollen belly of pregnant thoughts Each step choreographed through seasons of chance now frenzied to completion as leafs pant exhausted on dangling stems hold What season of woman has heightened with passion the souls lying here? Watching unfolding dreams my mind wanders again to you |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...what season of woman... I think you're intentionally trying to get all the ladies to flock to this one... and I think you will succeed... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"to rhythms heard best by laying hand on swollen belly of pregnant thoughts" and "season of woman" I love the female feeling of this..Wonderfully done! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This woman loved it!! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
BEAUTIFUL!!!!! |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
this is outstanding to say the very least.... May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
This is the kind of song that I enjoy from you most, Captain... *smiles* ~Tier |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
on dangling stems hold" You've painted a picture of a scene I witnessed today but you did it in such a vivid and unique way...lovely...just lovely Ron. Hugs, ~Krista ![]() Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Each step choreographed through seasons of chance now frenzied to completion as leafs pant exhausted on dangling stems hold What season of woman has heightened with passion the souls lying here? Often when I read you, it is like suddenly having a poetic explanation for my recent past. This is one of those times. And this is really an incredible poem. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This is indeed more beautiful work from you. I enjoy reading your work very very much, sir. The way this touched me is too exquisite to describe with just my words. ![]() Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence. |
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