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Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

0 posted 2001-10-03 12:23 PM

There is a time when all is gray,
and the sun is shielded in your day.
Not from rain and not from cloud,
but deep inside a covering shroud.
Wrapping around until you're bound,
sqeezing away without a sound.

Outwardly you look just the same,
to anyone who knows you by your name.
Your strength is such it hides a lie,
for the sun has gone from your sky.
You carry on with the daily tasks,
wearing a smile for a mask.

The very soul reaches out a hand,
searching out across the land.
Then you feel the shroud do lift,
for a breeze brought a sudden rift.
For the word is given to your ear,
relax, my friend, give me your fear.

Slowly the light began to shine,
as the gloom is left far behind.
For now you know, you weren't wrong,
only the others singing morose songs.
So lift your head to the new born sun,
for your life again, has begun to run.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-10-03 12:27 PM

Don't you know
that all the right words
rest in your pen
waiting for the
time of when

something we should all take strength from...

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2001-10-03 01:40 PM

Logan--To reach out a hand is one step, the other is to take it. A very thoughtful poem, my friend.

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

3 posted 2001-10-03 01:49 PM

Logan,

Wonderful uplifting poem! Nothing is ever that bad.

~Marie~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2001-10-03 01:52 PM

Logan, this is quite lovely in it's form and it's content. Wisdom and friendship are found in these words so sincere. Beautiful.......

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2001-10-03 02:28 PM

Sharing is caring,
and your poem reminds me
it is time to share
the sunlight

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2001-10-03 03:49 PM

There is a time when all is gray,
and the sun is shielded in your day.
Not from rain and not from cloud,
but deep inside a covering shroud.
Wrapping around until you're bound,
sqeezing away without a sound.

Outwardly you look just the same,
to anyone who knows you by your name.
Your strength is such it hides a lie,
for the sun has gone from your sky.
You carry on with the daily tasks,
wearing a smile for a mask.

The very soul reaches out a hand,
searching out across the land.
Then you feel the shroud do lift,
for a breeze brought a sudden rift.
For the word is given to your ear,
relax, my friend, give me your fear.
===================================

so..you've met my moody muse then

next time your behind me in the mirror, stay for tea *S*
better be careful what ya wish for sweet keeper.
beautiful poem of soul intentions Logan.

We're all feeding our lonely ... like it might go away,
Like the doors of heaven will swing wide ... if we just find the right words to say.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

7 posted 2001-10-03 04:03 PM

May I give you a "gentle smile"? Thank you for this one.

~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2001-10-03 04:46 PM

A soft smile and a gentle hug from me dear Logan! I love this piece! ~Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2001-10-03 05:39 PM

enjoy

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

10 posted 2001-10-03 08:33 PM

Very nice, and comforting in some ways.
Sandra

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

11 posted 2001-10-03 09:38 PM

Wrapping around until you're bound -

a great line.

Yes, Sandra, Logan is a wonderful comforter (wraps Logan around self until comforted)!

lovely, Logan

Cor

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2001-10-04 07:21 AM

Guardian~

'Outwardly you look just the same,
to anyone who knows you by your name.
Your strength is such it hides a lie,
for the sun has gone from your sky.
You carry on with the daily tasks,
wearing a smile for a mask.'

*gentle hugs*
Much love~
~*LittleGoose*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

13 posted 2001-10-04 12:20 PM

You'v given so much to so many with these few words...well done, Sir...

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

14 posted 2001-10-04 12:27 PM

M'Lo...your writing is so intimate, you have a gift of expression that translates intensely personal. Lovely thoughts on the breeze...smiles to you

Twilight Myst
Member

since 2001-10-04

Posts 58
Just A Myst At Twilight

15 posted 2001-10-04 12:27 PM

The very soul reaches out a hand,
searching out across the land.
Then you feel the shroud do lift,
for a breeze brought a sudden rift.
For the word is given to your ear,
relax, my friend, give me your fear.
~~~~~~~~~~~~
*** B R A V O ***

So very delightful
and uplifting, Logan!!

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