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Which Nectar
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Which Nectar |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Which Nectar I fly from cold, to hot, to cold From weak, to bold, to weak, to bold To sad, to joy, to sad, to joy My mind can’t stay steady employ. I vacillate in all I do From new, to old and old, to new I oscillate from side to side And in neither do I take pride. It would a port to stay the din. A seat of thought to reign within I would a scale to mind the tide I would a bale to stay, abide. I’m a butterfly in the air Still searching nectar flowers bare. The good and bad my heart partakes I think it is a sad mistake. This butterfly sighs heavy sighs It’s suckles on the flower why. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
First you rouse me with your Seuss then you talk like Mother Goose soon you let the wisdom in then give cause to form a grin... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*smiling at sunshine's reply*  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I’m a butterfly in the air Still searching nectar flowers bare. The good and bad my heart partakes I think it is a sad mistake. This butterfly sighs heavy sighs It’s suckles on the flower why. =================================== Forget the flowers ... they're not for poetic butterflies You need a nectar with power to answer your wisdom's whys You're a rhyme butterfly ... stop buzzing like a worker bee Meet me in Eden at three ... yes of course for rasberry tea *winkiewinkie*  me  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Oh, for goodness sake forget the nectar that flowers make If you want the best, by heck Come and suckle ... on my neck~  Then I think that you will see All those blossoms are not for thee~  For in your flight as Randy Dragon I offer you this honey-filled flagon~  Love ya'  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Seymour, Cute poem, I have not the answers for you! Anyway can't top the ones given.  Pleasant day to you, Marie  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh, you are a greedy one. You already have the sunshine and the mist, raspberry kisses, and the sweet deer. And now, even the midnitesun is lured by your word. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, You have lighted up my grin. *L* JM, It's a date, I'll fly there on Randy's back. Love and kisses. Marge, Your offer is to good to pass up. Love ya Sy Marie, Your answer suites me fine. Midnitesun, Big smile. *L* |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh, Sy you have made me smile sweet come wing your way to my retreat for flower power is my nane I wait for butterfly to tame |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sweet Martie, I will be there on Dragon wings. Love Sy |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I'm smilin' here Sy, thanks for the lovely read I’m a butterfly in the air Still searching nectar flowers bare. The good and bad my heart partakes I think it is a sad mistake. This butterfly sighs heavy sighs It’s suckles on the flower why. Absolutely wonderful! Maree |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I fly from cold, to hot, to cold From weak, to bold, to weak, to bold To sad, to joy, to sad, to joy My mind can’t stay steady employ. I vacillate in all I do From new, to old and old, to new I oscillate from side to side And in neither do I take pride. hmm I wish I had written these lines...it's my life to a T right now... ~Wynter sighs~~ "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Angel. Thank you for the wonderful. Wynter, The only thing that doesn't change is change itself. *L* |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Well....on a positive note...at least you know where you are at and what you are doing when you do it. You have it down better than most. How are you going to flit to all these other seductive little blossoms? You are good! And great in your verse!Sincerely, Regina |
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