Open Poetry #16 |
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Composer's Dream-Twilight&Willie |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212![]() |
Composer's Dream Quietly Standing a harp with no hands to warm her strings in sullen waiting Blind hope begging the night searching for a song Forgotten chords of a heart once played replaced with cries of the lost wind now feeding a sleepless turning Thirsting for the drink of remembrance this melancholy arch still strung with a longing to be loved Rise up and let our worlds collide one of passion and the other of sorrow A composer's dream giving birth from the sun's earnest rising to the white wonder of a full setting moon Find us there interpreting a kiss into the gift of music lasting I'll be the air for your breath pine tears that cleanse your spirit Hear my weeping plea Stretch out your fingers touch them across my soul Be the hands that give voice to my song once more ... and play me Twilight&Willie ©2001 |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
this is a very lovely piece. love the line "thirsting for a drink of remembrance" May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Twilight~ and WRBreezin~ This is just lovely~ 'A composer's dream giving birth from the sun's earnest rising to the white wonder of a full setting moon' Love that thought~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
WRbreezen, nice read, enjoyed. :-) Nice to meet you! Marie ![]() |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Harmony and cacophony side by side whispering through the strings of our hearts like ebony and ivory yin and yang up and down merging into one opus Can you tell I liked your poem, and found it to be inspiring? |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Beautiful write. This seems hauntingly familiar to me. I loved it. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
Twilight&Willie say "Thanks to each of you" |
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Twilight Myst Member
since 2001-10-04
Posts 58Just A Myst At Twilight |
Thank you everyone for your wonderful comments on this, and thank you Willie for the invitation!! |
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