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Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

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Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2001-10-02 05:22 PM

~ As the Sunlight Gently Rises ~
© by Rex Allen McCoy
~~~
You dance across a shadowed room
gentle glow
within your eyes
Consuming thoughts with soul ablaze
spreading sparkle
to morning's rise
Your trace ignites internal flame
with passion
and desire
Casting waves of rolling tremble
from a touch
of burning fire
Your heartbeat blends to match my own
as the sunlight gently rises
And a whispered thought within your arms
adds the treasure
to your surprises
~~~

sunshinemist
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since 2001-09-29

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Fl. sunshines early mist

1 posted 2001-10-02 05:34 PM

Rex, Lovely poem. Much feeling expressed. I also love rhyme.

~Marie~

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-10-02 06:01 PM

And a whispered thought within your arms
adds the treasure
to your surprises

love the ending *s

Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-10-02 07:38 PM

Oh Rex...Lovely indeed. Very romantic write!
Enjoyed. ~Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Kit McCallum

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Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2001-10-02 07:42 PM

Oh Rex ... just beautiful ... the love and passion flows so sweetly through these lines, very much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

5 posted 2001-10-02 08:57 PM

Marie ... thankyou ... I'm addicted to rhyme

Maureen ... The ending's how it got started ... thanks

Thankyou Nancy ... It's one of my favorites

Thanks Kit ... You're always so kind
What an Angel!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-10-02 09:56 PM

Rex~
Just beautiful~

'Your heartbeat blends to match my own
as the sunlight gently rises'

Such lovely, lovely thoughts~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

7 posted 2001-10-05 10:05 AM

This little treasure thought it could hide from me, but it was wrong...

so well done....

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

8 posted 2001-10-05 10:11 AM

Aha! Another smitten poet - nice development, Rex

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

9 posted 2001-10-05 12:04 PM

Thanks Marge

Prospecting were you, Sunshine?
thankyou

Long John ... You bet

Today is my niece's wedding ... so I'm off to get ready ... I guess I'm doing the video

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

10 posted 2001-10-06 01:20 AM

This is just beautiful. I love it.

Denise

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11 posted 2001-10-06 06:59 PM

Soooooooo beautiful, Rex! I love it!

sunshinemist
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since 2001-09-29

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Fl. sunshines early mist

12 posted 2001-10-06 07:10 PM

Rex, Absolutely Beautiful! I love the way that you displayed this piece.

smiles ~Marie~

Keep the Faith

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