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Open Poetry #16

jumping on the less than twenty bandwagon

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

0 posted 2001-10-02 03:17 AM

i watch a bee
gather nectar
from all kinds
of flowers,

yearning
for its
accomodating nature

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2001-10-02 04:08 AM

This is so cool!
I loved the "accomodating nature" phrase.
Thanks for bee-ing here.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-10-02 11:09 AM

ah... the metaphor is nicely presented... nice job!!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-10-02 11:15 AM

YES!! Good one! More more!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-10-02 09:31 PM

Kaile~
Very nicely done~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

5 posted 2001-10-03 09:11 AM

Not what I would have expected from your title..but it is lovely anyway and says alot.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2001-10-03 09:15 AM

Faterider,
Clever, enjoyed

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

7 posted 2001-11-24 11:18 AM

Hehe, I might not know exactly what your intentions were with the metaphor of that bee, but what I pictured in my mind was funny.

What I see is a guy (bee) socialising and moving around chatting with different galz (flowers)

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