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kaile
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0 posted 2001-10-08 12:03 PM


I see bulls lock heads
as i root myself
to the ground

My ego is forbidden
to crash
like that

© Copyright 2001 heng kaile - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2001-10-08 12:48 PM


Stay rooted to the ground, you might have a chance there.  Thanks for holding down your corner of the fort. And how are things over there?
Peace and hugs, Kacy

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The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2001-10-08 09:26 AM


And stand firmly always, good write.
Sandra

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3 posted 2001-10-08 11:36 AM


Faterider,
Interesting read.

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4 posted 2001-10-08 12:19 PM


Good one!  You know I love these!!  ~Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~
  

kaile
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5 posted 2001-10-08 12:24 PM


Kacy, i found it admirable that you asked after me when you must be in search of solace yourself..HUGS and God bless

thank you, Sandra and Seymour for your comments

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Rose from the Sky
6 posted 2001-10-08 12:46 PM


Very cool! I love under 20's..

"The Stars shine bright and down upon me, the Rose of the Sky" -Me

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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2001-10-08 04:24 PM


I'd say you had very good sense
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8 posted 2001-10-10 04:54 PM


its amazing how you say so much with so few words...  

enjoyed the read friend kaile  

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"what if jesus comes back like that..will he cry when he sees where our hearts are at?..." c.raye

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9 posted 2001-11-10 11:32 AM


I love the ones under 20 too. Thank you for sharing!  

smiles ~Marie~
happiness is contentment of the heart

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10 posted 2001-11-24 11:14 AM


Call me dumb  , Kaile...
But what does watching bulls lock heads, and being scared stiff, have to do with less than twenty??  

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