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Do you remember
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Do you remember |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Do you remember playing Moonlight Sonata anytime I’d ask you, always a little shy of your talent me, in the corner smiling discreetly of love Ask me if I remember how beautiful you were you, oblivious to anyone else in the room me, lost within your tune |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Recollection of a romantic memory that you made fun to share. Thanks, Larry C |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh, now you've hit a tender spot. One of my favorites, Beethoven's Moonlight Sonata. I often listen to this one as background for my favorite poetry. Now, what was this poem about again? I got lost there for a minute. Oh, that's right....about being lost in the moment. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Lost in love- totally immerse in the power of one. Love this one. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I've never had a woman play a Moonlight sonata for me but we listened to it together...and it was fabulous...James |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
cool....  i like the simplicity of love in this one..  hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
One of my favorites, and all wrapped up so well in your silken memories... thank you! |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
You, oblivious to anyone else in the room Me, lost within your tune ---------------- This is so sweet. I feel as if I'm standing in the corner with you. Lovely write. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
This is so sweet Thanks Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Oh what lovely memories. So much sweetness in so few words. Sounds like you were in heaven there If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* well if she doesn't she sure should. What a wonderful feeling this poem gave me. Well done. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
me, in the corner smiling discreetly of love sigh........... Look into the eyes of a man and |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely said Duncan....now get out of the corner...I have to sweep the floor. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
the images certainly me wish it were a memory very nice...-befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
There is nothing like watching and listening to the one you love play. Thanks for bringing back some wonderful memories for me, Duncan. I used to do this when I was in college and my boyfriend came to visit. He'd play and I'd listen, captivated by the music. All writing comes |
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