Open Poetry #16 |
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Rainbow Dancer's Serenade Of Eternity ( |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(This is dedicated to my dear friend Tara (Rosepetals25) Rainbow Dancer’s Serenade Of Eternity (Dedicated To My Friend Tara And Her Love) 11/1/01 “A sweet romeo rides alone into this enchanted meadow, spellbound by the beauty he foresees, A warm smile shimmering like the rainbow reflections casting upon the waterfalls in the lush heart of the vale Stopping, climbing off his horse to relax and lay upon the gorgeous emerald hillsides, seeing that this new world to him is magical He can hear a lovely angel sing from only miles away, smiling thinking to himself “What if the meadow can offer true love?” Sweet princess charming dreams in her flowerbed overlooking the glass palace, her hair shimmering in the light breeze With the gentle comfort that her prince charming is not far away, and she will love him soon She brushes her long hair as she looks out into the meadow’s distance, sighing with joy That she can hear his heartbeat in the lilac winds, as she rushes with a smile to find her romeo These Whispers of Eternity sound in the ears of this dear romeo in the midst of his peaceful slumber on the grass Her mellifluous kiss of desire wakes him in pleasure to follow the voice of his desired love Skipping through the woods in complete happiness, the prince and the princess run for each other Finally the crescendo of passion comes to a stop, true lovers embraced against each others heart Looking deep into each others eyes under the snowy-lavender flowered willow trees, the two hold each others hands gently, He says, “In this meadow my love for you has come, as the sun kisses my heart May we gaze into each others hearts eternally, my love will you shall never part” She says, “Today the robin sings deep down happily in my soul, in all lively spirits Kissed by a red rose of love, from your heart that beats heavenly in bliss!” Smiling together in the sweet words have been told, the loving prince holds his lovely princess around the neck, as she bends in slowly to embrace his lips Moaning softly, feeling the warm passion between them, they sit down beneath a magical oak tree whispering with poetic enchantment Kneeling down against the soft bark of the tree, reciting hearts poetry in the meadow mist True lovers hearts touch, as the prince and princess of each others souls finally meet together in heavenly embrace And the loving prince charming gallops off into his fair maiden’s heart The lovely princess embraces into his gentle arms and helps her up on his white sterling of timeless love, and they say together, “Forever and a day may our fairy tale romance last happily ever after May the love we have unraveled in this sweet meadow sing on forever” [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 11-01-2001).] |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Noah, Awwwww... this is sooo beautiful! I'm so honored that you dedicated this to me and Dave. *hugs* ![]() ![]() ![]() Hugs, Tara |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Fairy tales do come true and it is nice to read about a magic place where the do. In a world such as ours in a time such as we are in, it is great to read of this magic land. Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Noah, isn't love grand? ![]() Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What a sweet, passionate tribute, Noah! ![]() Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is beautiful! ![]() |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
This is what love is about. Lovely poem. |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
wow, noah, what a touching tribute to love - and very kind of you indeed to dedicate it to tara and i.... thank you! wonderful writing, man, keep it up! |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
very colorful, Noah, and I'm glad you decided to stick around these parts! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Simply beautiful write, Noah. What a wonderful gift!! ![]() All writing comes |
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