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Once Upon A Poet
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Once Upon A Poet |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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~*Once Upon A Poet*~ .jpg) Once upon a poem Quilled in ink of time There lived the soul of poet Immortalized in rhyme Spilled upon the pages In brightest butterfly hue An art admired by many An artist known by few Listen...you may hear it The steady beat of heart Feel the breath of spirit Her presence to impart Keep her in your knowing Forget not of this day Take with you in remember What poet had to say ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
vlraynes, Fascinating poem. Makes me pause and reflect. Even a little haunting. Fine job. Thanks, Larry C |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Very cool poem...pic looks like Stevie Nicks. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Keep her in your knowing Forget not of this day Take with you in remember What poet had to say ... Well said, well written... wonderful work Regards, Sudhir |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Vicky....how clever of you to take so few words and speak so very much to the heart of the poet.... well done, poetess... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vlraynes, A beautiful read, well done. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I agree with the above..it's a lovely poem and the graphic is great! Did YOU do the drawing? |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
VickyChicky~ What beautiful rhyme and cadence you've spread across my screen this morning. This was so lovely and the picture is perfect!  Hugs, ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautifully said |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
this is very cool tricks! much enjoyed..it was kind of mysterious..the mostly anonymity of the poet.. cool pic of stevie..who drew?? hugs, g~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ As I read your 'Once Upon ..' it became quickly evident to me This is one I wish I had done for it speaks so cleverly~ 'Keep her in your knowing' You can rest assured I will~ I admire the talent in this beauty from the poet's quill~ *You just get better and better~  Love you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
loved it...your picture is in the same pose as the one you posted with the poem I enjoyed *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Vicky--This is just beautiful..so glad I didn't miss it. Hugs! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very nicely done, Raynie one |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ok...first of all, I must confess that, even though I AM familiar with Stevie Nicks, it honestly didn't even dawn on me that this was a drawing of her. It just worked for the poem. LOL Anyway...for those of you who are interested, the drawing was done by an artist from Belgium by the name of Johanna Pieterman. Larry- Thanks so much...glad you enjoyed this. Duncan- Apparently it is her..LOL Thanks much, my friend. Sudhir- Thank you, my poet friend. Karilea- You've put a smile on my face with your kind reply...thank you.  Seymour- Always nice to see your name on a reply. Thank you so much. Poet deVine- Thank you so much, my friend. Makes me smile to see a reply from you. I only wish I could draw like that. Krista- So glad you enjoyed this one. Your replies always make me smile. Hugs to you. Interloper- Thank you. dg- Thanks muchly...glad you like this one. I really didn't know it was Stevie...oh well. Love ya Marge- You just made my day!  That you would wish to have written something from my pen is the ultimate compliment. Thank you, thank you, thank you! Love you bunches, sweetest buddy of mine. Wynter- I hadn't noticed that..thank you for pointing that out to me. Really happy you enjoyed this. Martie- I'm glad you didn't miss it too, sweet friend. Thanks so much! Hugs to you Balladeer- Makes me smile to see you here. Thanks so much..glad you enjoyed. Love and hugs, sweet man Hugs to all, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 10-03-2001).] |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
You can sure come up with some good ones. Your a poet... and ya know it! Love ya, Deb |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
And her name was Vicky And we will remember Lovely Liz |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Very lovely...and yes it has to be Stevie ha..i thought the same thing too...enjoyed..hugss ~Victoria~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"Immortalized in rhyme..." I shall remember Very nicely written, Vicks..  |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Very lovely to capture the heart of the poet. Much enjoyed this one! Nice to meet you.  ~ Marie ~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
BEAUTIFUL....JUST BEAUTIFUL!! ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Vicky, This is so beautiful...I love the picture, it fits so perfectly! Another great one my dear friend! Love ya Cindi |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You know that pose is just like you? Vicky this was one of your very best, I loved it. ~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Well expressed, Vicky! Such a beautiful message. May I call this a poet's prayer?  Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Kirksters Junior Member
since 2001-07-01
Posts 47 |
Hey Vicky, Excellent poem, verry well written. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautifully done dear Poet Vicky!! Charisma |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beatiful. Enjoyed reading it. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
love the picture and the words, she is one of my favorites! |
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Twilight Myst Member
since 2001-10-04
Posts 58Just A Myst At Twilight |
Keep her in your knowing Forget not of this day Take with you in remember What poet had to say ~~~~~~~~~~ This was such a beautiful, beautiful read!! I so enjoyed it... Thank you! |
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Rindercella Member
since 1999-11-12
Posts 64La La Land |
I thought this was pretty. Really enjoyed it. *If the shoe fits ... the castle is yours* |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Such a lovely verse you have penned here. You are a talented lady, as is the artist If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Deb- Thanks so much, my friend. You always make me smile. Liz- It's always a pleasure to see your name on one of my posts. Thank you so much for the kind words. Victoria- Oh well...I just thought it worked for the poem...LOL. Glad you like. Nan- Thanks muchly, my sweet friend. You've made me smile today. Hugs to you.. sunshinemist- Nice to meet you too. So happy you enjoyed this. Enchantress- Thanks so much! Cindi- Big thanks, my friend. Really glad you like! Love ya.. Mysteria- Thank you, my friend. So happy you enjoyed this one. Melissa- Glad you enjoyed this. Thanks much...and, yes you may. vandana- Thank you. Kirk- So nice to see your name here. REALLY glad you like! Love and hugs... Charisma- Thanks so much, sweet friend. Happy you enjoyed. SmartChick- Glad you enjoyed...thanks for reading. Lady of Shallot- Thanks...glad you like. Twilight Myst- Thank YOU! So happy to know you enjoyed this. Rindercella- Thanks much! Tracey- Your kind words have put a smile on my face. Thank you.. Hugs to all, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Rae of Sunshine Junior Member
since 2001-07-15
Posts 35Valley of the Sun, Arizona |
Vicky! Darling, this is gorgeous! So graceful and flowing! I like it alot! mua! Tanya |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Vicky, this is absolutely beautiful and as Stevie Nicks would say Enchanting Love the drawing of her btw... great choice Maree. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Ah and I almost missed this. Glad I caught it in time, great poem Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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