Open Poetry #16 |
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Visions |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone ![]() |
Roses fall from nighttime sky of a sudden, know not why. Angels come to sit and speak wondering, my knees go weak. Visions of a future bright come to push aside the night. Keeping hopes and dreams alive yes, somehow, we will survive. |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
hope dies last arthur |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Very lovely! ![]() ![]() |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed we will my friend. . .indeed we will. . . excellent work. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes Sandra, WE WILL SURVIVE. Lovely, ~hugs, Nancy~
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Indeed, we will survive, my friend...I liked this much, Sandra. ![]() Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
There are never too many poems of hope...I like this one very much ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CatalinaMoon~ 'Visions of a future bright come to push aside the night.' I pray it is so~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What beautiful thoughts and dreams here. Lovely imagery too. May all your dreams come true my friend If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Hope springs eternal and isn't that wonderful? Well, your writing is ![]() |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Very good....you've come a long way, Cat... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nice to see your hopefilled words. *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
yes, this lifted me a lot, thank you for this one! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I really like this. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Yes, Sandra, you will survive for you have the strength to do so..very gentle smile..enjoyed |
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boardman Junior Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 44 |
Hi Sandra, I like this one very much! Very nicely put. Beautiful picture too! Keep up the good work. I Will look for some more. Vince Ours minds are endless atoms in search of the beginning - boardman |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Good luck hon...hugss...hope all is well ~Victoria~ |
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Twilight Myst Member
since 2001-10-04
Posts 58Just A Myst At Twilight |
Touching and beautiful... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Ahh, visions... one step away from action; two steps from attainment; three steps from memories; and four steps from regret... I hope you "two-step it" to see your dreams come true! ![]() -MVS "Learn to let go of fear, doubt, and disbelief..." --THE MATRIX |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
yes, somehow, we will survive. A vision and voice of determination. We must! Very wonderfully done Sandra! Sincerely, Regina |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Cat, I loved this........it gives me hope. ~Laura~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I intend to keep on living until I die...and then I will live my new life...James |
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