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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
No touch physical contact of skin on skin to remind me I am whole just this hole filled in part by brushings of words that take so little space as to be invisible what's left becomes a place to fall into drowning or struggling on steep sides to claw from pit to rim sliding in again repeating again again No touch tender carress to say in language of bodies it will be OK never the same repeated again again still life no painting to enjoy |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
quote: Wow..... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Despair digs a deep hole with steep sides. Well put my friend. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is sad but sweet...and have you ever posed for an artist? There is something very sensual about it--there is the humanity of the moment and the exchange of essence and the erotica of being--well, just BEING, AND then there is the suspense of seeing how it all turns out through another's eyes...I'll have to tell ya about that sometime! (once I figure it out of course--  ) Bravo, m'friend! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a deeply emotional write. So sad, but wonderfully expressed If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Cpat Hair, Lovely and very sensual read.  It is nice to meet you also, and will be reading more. Marie |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Despair nicely penned.... |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Like this.... very well done |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Cpat: "just this hole filled in part by brushings of words that take so little space as to be invisible" You may not see them, but the feeling they tell IS. Well done! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
C...that is exactly the description of how I feel. Your words make me feel not so alone...in knowing oh..and here's a *hug* even though you can't feel it "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 10-02-2001).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Even after letting go, something remains that reminds us of what we will never know again. And you've captured that...perfectly. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I see you as a masterpiece in this! Sometimes shades of grey can be beautiful. Garbo painted volumes. The bigger tragedy of the hole...Is to come out and realize you liked it better in it. Grab on C! You have wings.Sincerely, Regina |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very intense write..enjoyed! ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Sometimes the biggest confort comes from within, but it's not that easy to come to terms with ourselves. Great expression of our human experience. |
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