Open Poetry #16 |
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Ocean Waves |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Ocean Waves Standing alone on the edge Winds blowing, arms crossed Tears falling at my feet It is cold out there Not a soul nearby Hours I must have stood A gull stopped by and stared Spread its wings flew away somewhere A terrier sat nearby, wet Came to my feet Nosed around, and in one moment Ran up the beach, beyond the dune Straight ahead a crab Within the retreating water Managed to stop and clean its claws Then came the wave taking it away I looked to the right into a slight drizzle Right behind the beginning of a rainbow Stretching from the edge of the horizon Turning slightly to the left A sea turtle slowly edging to its nest For a second looked my way Before resting for another day I dared turn around To look behind I felt something brush my head I quickly turned a little frightened Nothing to see but a leaf at my feet Emerging from a shell within, a butterfly Startled, opened its wings, flew up to my face And in a moment I felt at peace A butterfly, and friends came face to face I wondered where those closest were. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Your words had me standing there at the waters edge, watching the parade of life as it enveloped you. A beautiful work, with vivid imagery. Thanks. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
DJD~ this is simply amazing.... |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautifull my friend!!!! Charisma |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nicely done ![]() |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
bump this beauty ![]() Charisma |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Excellent descriptions! Enjoyed. ![]() ~Marie~ |
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