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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-09-18 06:18 PM

Evaporated Mist of Day

Liked you since the day I first met you
and on that day you stole my heart away.
My heart won't let me forget you.
Your presence really makes my day.

As I look into your lovely eyes
your beauty evaporates the mist of day
til I want to hold you and I want to kiss you
and slowly take your breathe away.

When we're together and I kiss you
you so tenderly let me have my way.
I love the way you kiss me
each time you take my breathe away.

Jameslee
September18,2001

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (edited 09-18-2001).]

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

1 posted 2001-09-18 06:34 PM

James, the title is wonderful, creates images all of its own. The poem is a lovely tender one and so full of devotion. Loved it.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Topheth
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

2 posted 2001-09-18 06:48 PM

Has a warm, fuzzy feel - and that's always a good thing.

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2001-09-18 08:27 PM

A love poem... What a delightful change of pace for an otherwise difficult time... Thankya, James..

Suzanne Arlene
Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 377
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2001-09-18 08:50 PM

Oh that was just so sweet. Liked it muchly

Suzanne

Pip
Member

since 2001-09-14

Posts 59

5 posted 2001-09-18 09:14 PM

Very nice, very nice!

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

6 posted 2001-09-18 09:21 PM

*deep sighs*
Geesh...Do I really have to say I love this?

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2001-09-18 09:57 PM

I'm so glad I found you and this poem in here tonight..really needed the break. And, in doing so found some great romantic writing, including this one. Thank you. Enjoyed.

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

8 posted 2001-09-18 11:34 PM

This is wonderful. It brought back some great memories.
alan

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2001-09-19 04:01 AM

JamesMichael~
We can always count on you to romance us, my friend~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

10 posted 2001-09-20 09:53 PM

JamesMichael-
   I echo Marge...leave it to you to give
   us a love poem when we most need it.
   Nicely done.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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