Open Poetry #16 |
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you've won!! |
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bonnie1961 Junior Member
since 2001-09-30
Posts 44ny, usa |
even when the sky is cloudy i still can see the sun it's in the way you look at life that tells you if you've won the world can be so cold and cruel or be so warm and kind it doesn't matter who you are or what your state of mind to be completely happy you must start from within you've got to learn to love yourself before the others can join in so take a look around you and count the blessings that you've got you might be quite surprised to see they've gone from a little to alot and next time when it's cloudy look hard, you'll see the sun you'll feel it deep inside you thats when you'll know you finally won |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
BRAVO, Bonnie!! That's exactly the right attitude! ![]() |
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bonnie1961 Junior Member
since 2001-09-30
Posts 44ny, usa |
thank you for your kind words......this is the best site on the web! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Very good poem here to be completely happy you must start from within you've got to learn to love yourself before the others can join in Excellent piece of advice in those lines. Enjoyed your poem If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You haven't been around long enough to know that I would like this one...otherwise I would thank you for writing it for me! So enjoyed! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
wonderful thoughts Bonnie! Kathleen |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Did I welcome you already??? Don't know anymore ![]() You wrote a great poem there, so true those words, really lovely Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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