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Open Poetry #16

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Topheth
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

0 posted 2001-09-30 01:13 PM

'Ask You'

I did not ask you
to dream of me.
I will not ask you
to leave.
I cannot ask you
to stay with me.

I shall not ask you
but plead.

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

1 posted 2001-09-30 01:45 PM

And I shall not make you plead
but answer this call
and give it to you all....

A very lovely piece......

Thank you
************************

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-09-30 05:26 PM

......and he melts me again........
*sigh*
Jeph, this is so romantic

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-09-30 06:55 PM

Jeph, oh my...oh my...I missed this one today..glad I caught it. *sigh* You have done it again...the eyes help as well.

Good write...really enjoyed the feelings.
~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2001-09-30 07:02 PM

Wonderful closing line to these sentiments Topheth ... very much enjoyed your thoughts in this!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-09-30 07:06 PM

Nice heartfelt write, Topheth.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

6 posted 2001-09-30 10:00 PM

Lovely. So much emotion in so few words

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

7 posted 2001-10-02 02:58 AM

your poems are so intense and always hit me hard

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