Open Poetry #16 |
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Harmony Transcends |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia ![]() |
Harmony Transcends Leaves sweet scented Tranquil resting place Having had this dream In warming embrace My beautiful dreamer Whispering me there Holding out his arms Then stroking my hair Upon the grassy bank Arms cradled tenderly Love moving forward In gently lowering me The evergreen canopy With jasmine overhang In the springtime sun He held me and sang Sensuous and sweet Honeysuckle boughs Passionately knowing Love intimate vows Of words and touch We shared a dream Flowing of pleasures Along by the stream Aromas filling the air Natures loving blends Where dreamers meet Harmony transcends Hope©2001 |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Hello hopeful one, what a great poem, I thought it was very discriptive, and kinda romantic . Thanks a lot . L.of.L. Tom . 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hope~ It's all so lovely ... but this - 'The evergreen canopy With jasmine overhang In the springtime sun He held me and sang' -whispered gently to me~ Thank you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Tom , yes I'm always living in "Hope and always the romantic LOL by the way I am originally from England Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey thanks Marge my friend , so pleased you enjoyed Hugs Hope |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
enjoyed this very much...... ~Connie~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Hope- Such a soft and tender write. Much enjoyed. ![]() Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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