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vandana
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0 posted 2001-09-30 11:17 AM



Here I am again,
Writing each page
of every song,
Remembering the things
of you and me,
Here Iam,
Lighting the candle,
In a memory of our love,
looking back at those
lovely times
we had,
Here Iam standing
and looking around,
Where did we go wrong?
Thought our love was so strong,
Here Iam again,
You are reminded me so much
of the times,
Here Iam ,
every song,
you and I wrote It
a long ago,
Singing every line
of a song,
Reminded me of you so much,
Here Iam,
Again,
falling rain,
Every day,
with a pouring rain,
Here Iam ,
holding on the time,
Don't know
Where did we go wrong,
Here,
Iam .......

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1 posted 2001-09-30 11:23 AM


Oh Vandana, this is a favorite of yours, I will keep this one. I loved every word!  
Denise
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2 posted 2001-09-30 12:46 PM


Beautifully expressed, Vandana! Lovely!
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3 posted 2001-09-30 12:51 PM


yes
the confusion
the lack of understanding
why
something every one who has loved and lost undersatnds
arthur

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4 posted 2001-09-30 03:17 PM


(((((hug)))))

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5 posted 2001-09-30 03:28 PM


beautifully done......like it a lot!

Charisma

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6 posted 2001-10-01 08:34 AM


VanDana~
This is lovely, hon~

'Here Iam,
Lighting the candle,
In a memory of our love,
looking back at those
lovely times
we had'


A beautiful flicker~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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7 posted 2001-10-01 09:00 AM


This is just lovely. Really enjoyed reading it.
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