Open Poetry #16 |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Here I am again, Writing each page of every song, Remembering the things of you and me, Here Iam, Lighting the candle, In a memory of our love, looking back at those lovely times we had, Here Iam standing and looking around, Where did we go wrong? Thought our love was so strong, Here Iam again, You are reminded me so much of the times, Here Iam , every song, you and I wrote It a long ago, Singing every line of a song, Reminded me of you so much, Here Iam, Again, falling rain, Every day, with a pouring rain, Here Iam , holding on the time, Don't know Where did we go wrong, Here, Iam ....... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Oh Vandana, this is a favorite of yours, I will keep this one. I loved every word! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully expressed, Vandana! Lovely! |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
yes the confusion the lack of understanding why something every one who has loved and lost undersatnds arthur |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
(((((hug))))) Kathleen |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautifully done......like it a lot! Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ This is lovely, hon~ 'Here Iam, Lighting the candle, In a memory of our love, looking back at those lovely times we had' A beautiful flicker~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just lovely. Really enjoyed reading it. |
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