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jenifeather Junior Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 31Here |
the twinkle in your eye the light inyour smile the ring in your tongue i see once in awhile the graze of your fingers touch of your hand the way that you listen and seem to understand the bandana on your head the pants that you wear the feeling of your skin the softness of your hair the way that you think the words you express your addiction to music the soul you possess the confidece you have the way that you walk the feeling i get when you and i talk the way that i felt when we said good-bye the sadness i had when i started to cry the way that you've been since the first day we met everything about you that i'll never forget |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Beachlove uhhh  Like it Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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jenifeather Junior Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 31Here |
i just wanted to clear this up for future referance. beach is a nickname for .....someone. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"the way that i felt when we said good-bye the sadness i had when i started to cry the way that you've been since the first day we met everything about you that i'll never forget" yes, I know how you feel  this is well written |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Loved the poem. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Full of feeling and emotion. Nicely expressed. All writing comes |
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