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Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

0 posted 2001-09-29 11:49 AM

Blazing, bloody red
Brightest solar star
Your circumference rests
Wide upon the western horizon

In bloody red blaze
You take center stage
With blinding
Glaring beam

Bloody red, your scorching arms
Reach far across the sky
You befriend us in spite of your intolerable heat
And unfantonable powers

Bloody red, resting upon the edges of our globe
Your grand exit awaits
When you bid our day good-by
With pink trails turned to darkness

RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

1 posted 2001-09-29 11:50 AM

We must be on the same wavelength today. Good write!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-09-29 03:58 PM

Songbird...This is lovely. Enjoyed! ~Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

3 posted 2001-09-29 04:36 PM

Thanks for a lovely sunset. I enjoyed it much.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-09-29 05:32 PM

Breathtaking imagery, Songbird. Nicely done!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

5 posted 2001-09-29 07:28 PM

Very nice one, Songbird. Lovely words.

Warm smiles,
Sunshinemist

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

6 posted 2001-09-29 09:22 PM

Oh, how I truly love this! You've described this so very precisely...excellent excellent write! Love it...and into the library it goes...

sp

tried to write a letter
to tell you how I feel,
but all I kept on writing
was slipping on the tears from the day...

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

7 posted 2001-09-30 10:08 PM

I am honored that you all stopped into to read this and took the time to comment. Thanks very much.

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