Open Poetry #16 |
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No Such Thing..... |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you ![]() |
Ever after let me down When you said good-bye to me I found tears are real And not some fantasy Forever is just a dream A beautiful make believe Cause in real life People you love, really do leave Friends do get left behind Blows the fairy tales apart Destroying the happy illusion Of “Friends Forever”, I kept in my heart ~SEA~ |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
why is that??? I'm still trying to figure that one out. . . well done. . . from the heart. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
![]() If it's friends you need, just look around Within the Passions, they abound So remember never say "never" When considering Friends Forever. [This message has been edited by RSEvans (edited 09-29-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Very nice write, I enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah SEA...You sound so sad. I'll be your Forever Friend, if you want. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ![]()
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Truth is reality...James |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
(((warm hugs))) words straith from your heart, hope you are ok my friend. Charisma |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Oh SEA, there is so much truth on your words it makes my heart ache. I'll never understand why it must be so. Forever seems like a far fetched illusion at times. Sigh. Very well written, my friend. All writing comes |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sea, friends may come and go but the love we feel for them is constant. Lovely thoughts. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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SEA![]() ![]()
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Thank you dear friends, I am feeling kinda sad today. It's my friend's birthday, I called this morning and left a message....I will just have to try again later LOL at any rate it's all ok, and thank you ![]() |
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jenifeather Junior Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 31Here |
your poem made me cry. i just moved and it summed up all that i have been feeling very well. that you for writing it and sharing it. jennifer |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
I have to respond for my mothers sake. They moved so much that she felt this pain too often. But, once again, you expressed it so well. Thanks SEA. Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either. larry c |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it ![]() |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I know what you mean Sea, but remember........we all will be your friend forever here at passions. But you are right.....life does move on. Oh sigh....... Hugs sweet lady! ![]() On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
How true. Well done, gal. Well done indeed! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
(((( Hugs to you))))) |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is so sad, but so true. I think everyone has felt like this at least once in their lives If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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