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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
The breeze of time carries me along, singing to me a faraway song. No sirens could sing a song so sweet, than the song I heard, upon first meet. Long looks denoted the depths therein, of times before when we began. Others may scoff at what I say, but to them I say, you will rue the day. For the unknown is known to very few, and they are the ones that do pursue. To uncover the feelings that surface at times, maybe only coming in simple rhymes. Simple is complex if you look that way, or complex is simple in a final say. But you would know of what I believe, for what is there is easy to conceive. So trust the wind when it does seek, in a gentle feel to touch your cheek. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Logan--You do sing the sweetest song..and I think all is as it should be. Hugs! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dear Logan, every word has been selected and planted, expertly, in the exact place where it belongs in this piece. What can I say? I know....I understand. "So trust the wind when it does seek, in a gentle feel to touch your cheek." Thank you for this one, gentle man..soft smile and a hug. ~Nancy Lee~
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is what I am doing, Logan, trusting the wind..What a very beautiful poem, thank you. Sandra |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
ahh..Sweet Warrior. I knew you were about! You hide, but I know you're here. This is a wonderful poem.  Its good to see you writing again.  Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Logan, this is so beautiful, but these lines struck me the softest...... "So trust the wind when it does seek, in a gentle feel to touch your cheek." lovely |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
to those who know wherein to look so much becomes a gilt-edged book... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Logan~ You're wonderful, you know ?  Simple is complex if you look that way, or complex is simple in a final say. But you would know of what I believe, for what is there is easy to conceive. So trust the wind when it does seek, in a gentle feel to touch your cheek. And the circle runs round~ You inspire the fire~ Love ya' ~*Goose*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Long looks denoted the depths therein, of times before when we began. ======================================== For the unknown is known to very few, and they are the ones that do pursue. To uncover the feelings that surface at times, maybe only coming in simple rhymes. Simple is complex if you look that way, or complex is simple in a final say. But you would know of what I believe, for what is there is easy to conceive. So trust the wind when it does seek, in a gentle feel to touch your cheek. ======================================= YOUR RHYMES ROCK!!! could this poem be any cooler???? nope could the message be any truer??? nope could the poet be any wiser??? nope Do I love this melody of heart, soul and spirit??? YEPPERS!! very very cool sweet keeper. jm |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Martie, what a sweet comment to make from the maker of the sweetest poems..Thank you gentle one..very gentle smile Enchantress, ahh, glad you enjoyed this one from one with a magical touch yourself..thank you for being here, very gentle smile Sandra, how good to see you again, and I am happy that you are so doing..thank you for your kindness..very gentle smile Ahhh, gentle maid, your words always fill me with happiness with your kindness, but does not the wolf glide and in remaining still, is there, but not seen, eh? very gentle smile, thank you for your always kindness SEA, for you to say so, fills me with gratitude from one that makes the heavens sing and the skies weep with your words..thank you for being here..very gentle smile Ahhh, Sis, you always were the astute one..very gentle smile, thank you for reading Geez, Goose, very gentle smile, you make me blush when you talk like that..thank you with hugs and love Geez, Janet Marie, between you and Marge, who both make the stars shine brighter, and the moon, OMG, with Marge around, I never should have mentioned the moon, lol, but, you both are way too kind to one that lags far behind your tumbling words of wonderment..thank you, gentle person for all your kind words..very gentle smile |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh that was sweet! I think I just felt the wind touch my cheek. ~Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self~ Cyril Connolly |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"For the unknown is known to very few, and they are the ones that do pursue. To uncover the feelings that surface at times, maybe only coming in simple rhymes." Your words are spoken with truth, honesty and love. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Your words are simply complex... and full of wisdom besides. Listen to the wind - It knows of what it sings... Nicely done, kind sir...  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a wounderful poem. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I like this one much, my friend. The wind speaks volumes if only we take the time to listen. All writing comes |
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