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A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-09-28 06:36 PM

as the stirrings of nature
bring the fall of autumn
moments of passion
replay on the parchment
of my soul's journal

in hues of red and gold
dreams amassed
within my heart are
carried by cool gentle breezes
to a New England forest

in a cashmere whisper
the embracement of colour
folds around you
and keeps you warm.

achildsheart
09-28-01

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-09-28 06:42 PM

WhispersCaress~

'a cashmere whisper'

Says it all~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2001-09-28 08:30 PM

*sigh* I don't know what to say. I'm just smiling.

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2001-09-29 12:29 PM

moments of passion
replay on the parchment
of my soul's journal

Loved these lines. Very visual piece. Well done.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2001-09-29 03:05 AM

This was simply lovely.

~Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self~ Cyril Connolly

Domzi
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

5 posted 2001-09-29 03:08 AM

Beautiful visual...the only two words that I can say.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-09-29 08:32 PM

Very nice writing. The imagery was stunning.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-09-30 01:49 PM

shhhh. . . I can hear them changing now. . .

wonderfully done. . .

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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2001-09-30 02:01 PM

Hi, this is beautiful
I especially liked these lines
"moments of passion
replay on the parchment
of my soul's journal"
The sound of that is perfect.
Sandra

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

9 posted 2001-09-30 02:13 PM

in a cashmere whisper
the embracement of colour
folds around you
and keeps you warm

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Oh.....I hear them too.
So gently whispering.....

Thank you
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A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

10 posted 2001-09-30 06:05 PM

Gosh, such great replies.
Thank you all, so much.
Thank you Thank you Thank you

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

11 posted 2001-09-30 08:16 PM

Very lovely Annie...enjoyed as always hon...

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