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Tennessee Angel
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Tennessee

0 posted 2001-09-27 11:45 PM



In those times
when things go wrong,
don't let life
steal your song.

Sing On...

When storms arise
and cloud the way,
just hold out
for a brighter day.

Walk On...

A certain someone
broke your heart
and tore your dreams
all apart.

Love On...

When life seems cold
and full of pain
and it seems no one
will be safe again,

Pray On...

You want to change the world
some way, some how.
You'd like to make a difference
starting now.

Write On...

© Copyright 2001 Stacy - All Rights Reserved
Nate Dogg
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Georgia, Fulton
1 posted 2001-09-27 11:57 PM


Thanks for your advice.....splendid poem!

Nathan

Sinister Handed
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2 posted 2001-09-28 01:50 AM


Advice we can all use from time to time.
I enjoyed this one a lot.

SmittenKitten
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3 posted 2001-09-28 01:55 AM



Stacy~ I love the cadence of this...and the content is nourishing to the soul.

Hugs,
~Krista  

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
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4 posted 2001-09-28 02:55 AM


The innocent message of this may be just what we need.
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2001-09-28 05:38 AM


TennesseeAngel~
This is lovely ...
I hope it again gets that easy to do~
Thank you for sharing~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2001-09-28 05:52 AM


We all have our place in this world...James
SmartChick
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7 posted 2001-09-28 10:00 AM


This is a beautiful poem. And, a very good message. But, real hard to do, sometimes.
vandana
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8 posted 2001-09-28 11:02 AM


liked it
cruz
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9 posted 2001-09-30 11:05 PM


Sing, walk, love, pray and write on... awesome!  especially like the LOVE AND PRAY parts.  well said!
Tennessee Angel
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Tennessee
10 posted 2001-09-30 11:27 PM


Nate Dogg --  Thank you so much for reading!  

Sinister -- So glad you enjoyed.

Krista --  That is so sweet.  Thank you!

Duncan -- We certainly need something, don't we?  Thank you for responding.  

Marge -- As always, it means so much to get a reply from you.  Thanks a bunch!  

James --  We most certainly do...though finding it is often hard.  

SmartChick --  Ah, but if it was easy it wouldn't mean nearly as much.  Thank you so much for reading.  

Vandana -- So glad you liked it.  Thanks!!

Cruz -- Ah, Loving and Praying will carry you through anything.  Thank you so much for the sweet response.  Look forward to reading some of your work.  

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